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 Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 4:20 pm Post subject: November poems as gifts |
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Here's mine to all thoese in november
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November is here
hear all the cheers
spinning on saturn
On earth, on land
Singing and dancing
going just wild
no need for thanking
just sing a song a while
when you fall
i'll always catch you
when you call
i'll pick up the phone
when you die
i hope i forgive myself
if i did something wrong
if u didn't get this song
love is all it needs
for me to say
love is what counts inside
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its called 'NOVEMBER LOVE'. I Wrote that short song. XD |
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| Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 4:30 pm Post subject: |
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| Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 4:33 pm Post subject: |
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Go where??
And you can put your presents here too XD |
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| Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 4:36 pm Post subject: |
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I was JK!  |
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| Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 5:35 pm Post subject: |
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you're righto shurie !!!
talent to spam !!
anyways, that poem sounds a bit wrong/weird..
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I agree with Shur! Why must you always do that!
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criticise her ?!?
but that's how I think !!
I think its a bit weird..
Criticism helps to improve, just because she wrote a poem you can't say its really good right?
It's like people giving "fake" comments on blends... always 10! 10! and 10!
no criticism no improvement !!
Its my opinion only !! and I'm not against her or anything..
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okiee....whatever my dear blabs!
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its just comments !!!
anyways, I sound like YZ don't I.. =X
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not go to a place!! i meant i'm letting you go this time even though you spammed,do you understand Cleo Wee-o?! 
