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PostPosted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 6:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote


FRiENDS TO BE

Alanda and Alynda "Alana and Ally" "the tweens"- black haired girls
Tanya[my comic character's name] "Tammy" - blondie
Camille Joanne "Candii" - brunette
>> chapter 1 : 1+1=2 +2




It's a wonderful day here in France and Alanada and Alynda, two "twin" wannabe pop-stars, have just arrived from Peru. Camille and Tanya, best friends - residents of France, were at the Gloria Da Bellagio Café, just like the tweens.

Camille was a former traveller from the Philippines. She travels to France to visit her sister, Lara, who is sick. In 2000, the 2nd time in the 1st year she started travelling, Camille met Tanya at Lisanya Café and Bar, now Gloria Da Bellagio Café.

So Camille, and Tanya, two individuals become two best friends. On the other hand, Alanda and Alynda were already friends, well, not really.

"Hi! You seem to be new here at France, can I help you? You look kinda lost," says Tanya to Alanda. "Eh-hem, if you don't know, I am Alanda Marchesca Démore, future hollywood popstar." "And I am Alynda Marjorie Démore, future popstar and actor." says Alana and Ally respectively.

"Oh, I'm sorry, we didn't know. But anyway, here's a map for your convenience." says Candii. "Eeew! A second-hand item!" Screams Ally. "A second-hand item? Are you crazy? Not everything can be new, just be satisfied." explains Tammy.

"Oh, wattever, Loser!" "Wait, we mean BIG FAT LOSERS! HAHAHAHA!" says Alana and Ally. Candii got furious and walked to the fence that seperated the sea from the land. Tammy just looks at Alana and Ally walk away as if they were superstars or something, waiting for an autograph.


>> wait for CHAPTER TWO LATER!
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 3:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

>> chapter 2: What the?


The next day, Tammy realized her clothes weren't pink and her bedsheets weren't blue, like when she went to sleep the night before. She stood up, and her foot landed on a soft, mushy circular object, which happened to be poo. And her sheets and clothes were colored in red and blue paint. And her skin was covered in charcoal.

Tammy phoned Candii and went back to Gloria Da Bellagio Café and saw Alana and Ally. Alana and Aly were laughing since Candii and Tammy stepped on poo AGAIN and slipped. Embarassed, Tammy managed to say "Jerks! You are all just wannabees! I DON'T THINK ANY RECORDING COMPANY WILL ACCEPT JERKS TO SING!" "AND YOU BOTH ARE LOoooooSERS!" screamed Candii, running away.

>> chapter 3: un-co-nec-ted

Alana and Ally, mad as mad can be, called the police. "Police! Come here quick! Here at Gloria Da Bellagio Café!"

to be continued.....
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 5:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

At the cafe, A&A (the twins) met Belinda (Brunette) and said that she had a terrible fashion sense. Belinda was angry at them for teasing her and walked away. At that moment, Blondie (Blonde one of course) came out of the cafe and ..." What's wrong with Belinda? Wait, don't tell me. You said she had a terrible fashion sense" And the twins in unison said "Du-uh!" Well, don't you think those twins were terrible? Blondie thought so too and went to join Belinda at they lake.

The twins: What's wrong with them? Was it something we said?

(At the lake)

Belinda: A&A are so terrible. I just feel like strangling them.

Blondie: Yeah, me too. I hate them.

Belinda: Let's dump them. They are no worth our friendship

Blondie: Sure! Unless you give me a valid reason not too!

*SNIGGERS*

(Back to A&A)

A&A: Ohh... I hate them soooooooo much. Let's not be friends with them. They have such a terrible fashion sense.



And just like that, because of a remark, one of the best friends ever separated into rivals. two against two
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow~ Yun Zhen & Priyanka! you're such good storytellers! Icon_emotions16
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah YunZhen and Priyanka, your both so good, you should keep writing Icon_emotions16
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Then we'll combine it all and make it into a book! Icon_emotions16
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 3:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'll find time to do another sequel. I know it doesn't sound like an ending.
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 6:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

make an ending soon, Yun Zhen! then we'll have our first official book from theASC forum! Icon_angels11 LoL
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 1:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great stories guys! Icon_emotions16
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 9:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

seriously, when will there be an ending to the story? Icon_emotions5 Icon_angels11
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 11:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow nice writing guys!
make a book made by ASCforum members!!wow..that'll be interesting!! =D
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